26 Aug

Master Long Sentences With One Simple Technique

I did a guest post for the Authors Think Tank site foreverwriters.com on Wednesday. In it, I talk about how so many of us writers fear long sentences, and how we can overcome that fear by making long sentences that are gorgeously crafted and easy to follow.

Check out the post here or click on the image below.

Learn to master long sentences with one simple techniqueEnjoy!

 

09 Jul

Six Emotional Story Arcs

This image captures the six emotional arcs presented by researchers at the computational story laboratory. These arcs are nothing new for most writers, but it can be handy to just take a look every now and then as a reminder of the what seems to work best. In reality, you only have to remember three of the arcs because the other three are just the inverse of those first three.

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If you want a fun explanation of the three arcs as taught by Kurt Vonnegut, check out this four minute video. Keep writing and have fun.

26 Oct

One Does Not Simply Write An Awesome Book

OneDoesNotSimplyWriteAnAwesomeBook

“The person who says it cannot be done should not interrupt the person who is doing it.”

06 Oct

Story Mood Analysis

If you really want to figure out the mood of your story, go to booktrack.com and create a booktrack for a chapter or two of your story. I did it for a piece I wrote a while back and found the process easy, fun, and enlightening. Creating the booktrack allowed me to laser in on the mood of my story in a way I never imagined possible.

Think about it: When you listen to a movie soundtrack, you instantly get a sense of the story’s mood, no matter where you’re at in the score. Having never attempted a formal mood analysis before, I was surprised when I went back through my short story and found that the music and sounds I’d chosen fit the mood of the words in the story.

For the most part, my mood changes fell on scene breaks, which was good because each scene focused on building a single mood to good effect. However, when I hit the climax of the story, I had to shift the mood mid scene. Being forced to put music to the words really brought that out for me.

Anyway, my point is this: if you want to do a mood analysis of your story, try creating a booktrack. You’ll be pleasantly surprised at what you discover.

13 Nov

How to Quit Writing Passive Sentences – Guaranteed Cure!

I just have to share this one as well. Enjoy!

John Vorhaus - The Comic Toolbox

I laugh (and cringe) every time I read that.

11 Nov

The Archplot Story Structure

I thought I’d share this little story structure doodad I whipped up.

Classic Plot, Three Act Structure, Hero's Journey, Seven Point Plot Outline, Screenplay Structure

Feel free to use for non-commercial purposes.

21 Jun

Create Suspense in Fiction

Techniques for creating suspense - part one

Suspense: that elusive element of every awesome book that writers strive to understand and create in their work.

  1. How do you define suspense? 
  2. How important is suspense?
  3. How do you create suspense?

First of all, I want to clarify something. When I began researching this, I started with the word tension instead of suspense. When I went to look up tension, I got a lot of definitions about stretching things out. That’s when I tried searching dramatic tension. All the references for dramatic tension redirected to suspense. And in truth, suspense is what I wanted. But not the genre, the concept. So, in short, dramatic tension and suspense are generally equal. Here’s a pretty good definition I found online.

Suspense:

1. a state of mental uncertainty, as in awaiting a decision or outcome, accompanied by anxiety or excitement.
2. a state of mental indecision.
3. undecided or doubtful condition, as of affairs. 

I agree with those definitions. But is it really necessary to create suspense in a book to keep the reader going?

Answer: Yes. Yes it is. It doesn’t have to be nail-biting, murderous-stalker-lurking suspense, but suspense needs to exist or the reader will feel like nothing is happening, despite the hundred pages they just read where lots of actions take place. Ever have that feeling while you were reading? Now you know why and here’s where it gets fun. How do we create suspense?

I’ll post my answer to this question one technique at a time. Ready?

POSSIBLE DANGER

Not “Danger” but “possible danger”. There’s a big difference and it’s a simple concept. Not that danger can’t create suspense, it’s just not going to be as reliable as possible danger. Here’s why.

Imagine your MC in a Western. He’s just been challenged to a duel. He’s standing in the middle of the dusty road, hand hovering over the grip of his pistol, facing one of the fastest draws in the territory. That’s danger. And, there’s suspense.

But let’s add in one simple thing.

As your MC stares into the eyes of his opponent, something pops into his mind. Did he reload his pistol after the bar fight last night? He fired five of the six rounds and passed out at some point. When he got up this morning, all he could remember was strapping on his belt with his gun already in the holster.

Now that’s suspense.

Let’s try another. This time without any actual danger involved.

A new mother is kneeling next to the tub, bathing her eight month old when the doorbell rings. She’s expecting a package she’ll have to sign for and doesn’t want to miss it. The bell rings again — an impatient deliverer. The front door is just around the corner from the bathroom. Little Lucy will be fine by herself for twenty seconds. Besides there’s only an inch or two of water in the tub. She dries off her hands and scampers to the front door.

I don’t know about you, but that creates some suspense for me. That’s what possible danger can do for you, your characters, and your novels. And that’s only one technique. Expect another in my next post.

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12 Oct

Welcome

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This site is the betterized replacement of my personal site, www.danieltoddnoyes.com, which I’ve had since forever ago. I’ll be posting things I had on that site and adding some pretty sweet pages for authors as well. I hope you come back often and enjoy what this wordie has to share.